Scene 8

Scene 8

Dialogue:

EXT. BENCH

Harry has a cheese pizza. He opens the box, gets a marker

pen from his bag and writes ’Will you be my girlfriend, or

is this too cheesy?’ on the box.

He tries to find Emily to give her the surprise, but can’t

find her. He’s also hungry and, as he can’t find her, he

takes one slice.

HARRY

One slice won’t hurt...

Time passes and Harry is sat on a bench, with the empty

pizza box beside him.
 

Location: Bench in Park

Characters: Harry

Costumes:

Harry

In this scene Harry is wearing black jeans and his green jacket in the actual film he has his jacket buttoned up so you cannot see the top what he is wearing. 















What we changed

• EXT. BENCH: In the 'pizza scene' the script stated that Harry ate the pizza as he couldn't find Emily. We changed this slightly in order to shorten the length of the film; instead of attempting to find Emily, Harry never makes it to that stage as he eats the pizza beforehand because he is hungry. Additionally, we thought that not making it in attempting to finding Emily because he was hungry added to the comedy aspect of our Romantic Comedy.