Thursday, 10 December 2015

Scene 10

Scene 10
Dialogue:
  EXT. CALLUM’S HOUSE
Harry knocks at the door.
No answer. Harry walks in and walks upstairs to Callum’s
room.
Emily and Callum sat on the settee while watching Netflix.
Harry takes out his list and rips it into pieces.
Location: Callum's Room.


Characters: Harry, Callum and Emily
Costumes:

Harry

Callum  
                 
In the final scene Callum is wearing a plain white top with black trousers.          

Emily






Scene 9



Scene 9
Dialogue:
INT. SOCIAL AREA STUDYBASE
HARRY
Callum mate, will you do us a favor
and get me Emily’s number.
CALLUM
Yeah, course mate.
Callum walks off to get the number.
Harry sat looking happy.
Callum walks back with the number on a piece of paper and
gives it Harry.
Harry ticks it off his list.
Harry walks off looks in his pocket for the number and
realises he has lost it, so he walks to Callum’s to see if
he has another copy.
Location: Study area at College
Insert Photo

Characters:
Callum, Harry and Emily

Costumes:

Callum

In this scene Callum is wearing a navy top with his black denim jack and black trousers, you cannot see what shoes Callum is wearing in this scene. 

Harry

 
In this scene Harry is wearing his blue jeans, a white top and his green jacket. 















Emily

Scene 8

Scene 8
Dialogue:
EXT. BENCH
Harry has a cheese pizza. He opens the box, gets a marker
pen from his bag and writes ’Will you be my girlfriend, or
is this too cheesy?’ on the box.
He tries to find Emily to give her the surprise, but can’t
find her. He’s also hungry and, as he can’t find her, he
takes one slice.
HARRY
One slice won’t hurt...
Time passes and Harry is sat on a bench, with the empty
pizza box beside him.
 
Location: Bench in Park

Characters: Harry
Costumes:
Harry


In this scene Harry is wearing black jeans and his green jacket in the actual film he has his jacket buttoned up so you cannot see the top what he is wearing. 















What we changed
  • EXT. BENCH: In the 'pizza scene' the script stated that Harry ate the pizza as he couldn't find Emily. We changed this slightly in order to shorten the length of the film; instead of attempting to find Emily, Harry never makes it to that stage as he eats the pizza beforehand because he is hungry. Additionally, we thought that not making it in attempting to finding Emily because he was hungry added to the comedy aspect of our Romantic Comedy. 

Scene 7


Scene 7
Dialogue:                                                                
INT. LIBRARY
Harry is stood at one side of the shelf, Emily on the other.
He can see Emily, who is reading a book. He looks at her.
He writes a note and slides it across the shelf sneakily
towards Emily, without looking, pretending he is reading.
Emily walks off and someone else’s hand picks up the note.
They look at Harry confused.
The boy who gets it gives Harry an interested, quirky look.
Harry looks embarrassed, sighs and walks away.
Location: Library



Characters: Emily, Harry + Alex (The Boy)
Costumes:
Emily

Harry
In this scene Harry is wearing his blue jeans and the navy blue long sleeved top which is seen in previous scenes. 


















Alex
Insert Photo

Scene 6

Scene 6
Dialogue:
EXT. TOWN HALL FOUNTAINS
Harry searches on Facebook for Emily Penaluna, her number is
there and he tries to ring it.
Harry rings the number.
BEATRICE
Hello.
HARRY
Hello, Emily. I've managed to find
you number on Facebook. I’ve been
wanting to talk to you for ages,
just not been able to get your
number. Would you like to go to the
cinema sometime?
BEATRICE
My names Beatrice, I think you’ve
got the wrong number sorry. Have a
nice night and I hope you find the
girl you’re looking for.
Harry rolls his eyes and puts the phone down.
Location: Town Hall Fountains

Characters: Harry, Beatrice (Voice)

What we changed
  • EXT. TOWN HALL FOUNTAINS: Removed scene where Harry searches for Emily's number on Facebook and calls the wrong number, speaking to an elderly lady named Beatrice instead. We removed this scene as, when we filmed it, the quality was poor and didn't link well with the film. This was due to the fact that Harry had previously looked up the number in an earlier scene and, in another scene, had also spoken to someone else. Therefore this scene felt inappropriate due to repetition of storyline.



Scene 5

Scene 5
Dialogue:
 INT. COLLEGE DAY
Harry walks round college to find one of Emily’s friends, Hayley
He stops her and she looks at him in disgust.
Yes?
Do you have... Emily’s number?
Hayley smiles and opens her phone.
Yeah, sure, it’s... 07930759139
Harry looks pleased.
That’s great thanks.
Hayley walks away smiling whilst Harry dials the number.
Harry ring the number.
BATTERSEA DOG AND CAT HOME
Hello, you’re through to Battersea
Dog and Cat Home, how can I help
you?
HARRY
Is this Emily?
BATTERSEA DOG AND CAT HOME
Sorry we have no staff members
called Emily here.. or dogs.
Harry puts the phone down and scribbles this idea off his
Location: College Day
 

Characters: Harry, Hayley, Battersea Dogs Home.
Costumes:
Harry
In this scene Harry is wearing his blue denim jeans, a navy long sleeved top and his green jacket.
















Hayley

In this scene Hayley is wearing a burgundy jumper and black jeans.


 

















Paul
 
In this scene Paul, the man who works at the dog centre is wearing a blue polo top, black jeans and black shoes. 

Scene 4

Scene 4
Dialogue:
INT. HARRY’S ROOM
Harry is sat on his bed with pen and paper, thinking
carefully about ways he could try to get Emily’s number.
He writes on his list: Look in yellow pages, ask friends,
see if number is on Facebook, ask Emily for number, do nice
gesture, ask Callum
HARRY
Right, first on the list: look in
that massive yellow book
Harry exits his room to go downstairs and collect The Yellow
Pages. He flicks through the book to Emily’s surname
’Penaluna’, but he cannot find it. He gets annoyed and
throws the book across the room.
He then sighs and crosses the first one off his list.

What we changed

  • INT. HARRY'S ROOM: Changed location from Harry's Room to College Day as we felt that having another house/location confused the script; it was simpler for the audience to familiarise Harry's character with College.
  • INT. HARRY'S ROOM: Removed look in Yellow Pages from the list Harry creates to lose the Yellow Pages scene as it didn't work with the rest of the scenes and made the film too long for a short film.
Locations: College


Characters: Harry
Costumes:
Above is a photo of the outfit Harry is wearing on the day which we filmed this scene. In this scene you can only see the top which is a navy long sleeved top.

Scene 3

Scene 3
Dialogue:
INT. CALLUM’S HOUSE
Callum turns the TV on. Romantic Film in background.
HARRY
Do you know that new lass Emily?
She’s just started.
CALLUM
No, whats she look like?
HARRY
I’ll get her up on Facebook, give
us a sec.
Harry gets his phone out and searches ’Emily Penaluna’ on
Facebook.
HARRY
I don’t have her on Facebook. This
is her though.
CALLUM
Well you need to get her number
then.
HARRY
Yes, I know just dunno how to.
Location:
Callum's House, downstairs in living room.

Characters: Callum and Harry.

Costumes:

Callum

In this scene Callum still has the same outfit on however he has removed his denim jacket and shoes as he is now inside.

Harry
In this scene Harry is still wearing the same outfit as the previous scene however he has removed his jacket as he is now inside. 

Scene 2

Scene 2
Dialogue:

INT. CAR PARK
Callum then enters and greets Harry.
CALLUM
Hey up mate, how ya doing?
HARRY
Not bad pal, how about you?
CALLUM
I’m alright. Do you wanna come to
mine?
HARRY
Yeah pal, I’ll drive
Callum and Harry walk to Harry’s car and Harry drives to
Callum’s House.


Location: College and Car Park.







Characters: Callum and Harry.

Costumes:

Callum




In this scene Callum has black jeans a denim jack which is open so you can see his black top underneath, He is also wearing black vans. 

Harry


In this scene Harry is wearing his black jeans again, with a white top, this is similar to the blue top he wore in the previous scene and also his green jacket again.

Scene 1

Scene 1
Dialogue
INT. COLLEGE DAY
Harry and Emily walk past each other in corridor at College.
Harry takes notice of Emily although she does not notice
him, his smile at her goes unnoticed.
Locations: Corridor in College



Characters: Emily and Harry

Costumes:

Emily





Harry: 

In this scene Harry is wearing black trousers and a blue t-shirt. 

Costumes for Titles Sequence

Costumes for Title Sequence

Callum
In the title sequence Callum will wear black trousers with his black parka coat and black chelsea boots. There is no top as he has his coat zipped up so you cannot see what top he is wearing. 

Emily




Harry
In the title sequence Harry is wearing black jeans, a black short sleeved t-shirt and a green jacket. This jacket is worn throughout the majority of the film.